No direct comment per se (need to read it a second time and think about it a bit), but I just wanted to say I was sorting through a stack o' papers the other day and I have a notebook of useful articles about writing that I've printed out for my own reference, and I noticed that an awful lot of them were posted by you (and much of the remainder posted by people you work with). So thanks for putting the effort in to post these sorts of things (-: